nice low poly person so far, the most obvious thing is it needs feet, aside form that it seems a little too long in the torso, but aside from that very nice.
His wrists or his palm are too flat, it makes that part of his arm look strange.
I would have really liked to see you make the characters face look more like a Mesoamerican person. At this point he looks very European; maybe you can adjust this when you do the high poly.
I am not a character modeler and I'm not the best person to give feedback on, but it looks like a good start for a low poly version so far. Does the torso look a little long? I ask that in the form of a question for someone that maybe knows better, but so far anything that needs to be done is probably minor before moving onto the high poly.
looks good for base. Get all the good topology in, make sure the proportions are right (look good now) and unwrap before ZBrush. That way your lowest subdivision can be the low poly.
I still intend to optimize the mesh more before exporting to zbrush. it does look flat in some areas, and he does seem a little long but this should be fixed in the high poly.
The form looks very good, but the topography is kind of a jumbled mess. I guess you are using a different pipeline, and I would like to see what is going to happen in Zbrush
looks good except for the lack of feet you already mentioned. if you're doing like everything in zbrush or mudbox then it's good for now. can't wait to see it.
Great definition of the face. There's something about your rear image that makes it seem like the backs of the knees and/or the calf muscles could use a bit more form.
nice low poly person so far, the most obvious thing is it needs feet, aside form that it seems a little too long in the torso, but aside from that very nice.
ReplyDeleteHis wrists or his palm are too flat, it makes that part of his arm look strange.
ReplyDeleteI would have really liked to see you make the characters face look more like a Mesoamerican person. At this point he looks very European; maybe you can adjust this when you do the high poly.
I am not a character modeler and I'm not the best person to give feedback on, but it looks like a good start for a low poly version so far. Does the torso look a little long? I ask that in the form of a question for someone that maybe knows better, but so far anything that needs to be done is probably minor before moving onto the high poly.
ReplyDeletelooks good for base. Get all the good topology in, make sure the proportions are right (look good now) and unwrap before ZBrush. That way your lowest subdivision can be the low poly.
ReplyDeleteI still intend to optimize the mesh more before exporting to zbrush. it does look flat in some areas, and he does seem a little long but this should be fixed in the high poly.
ReplyDeleteI am watching this one with very strong interest because i have seen your work on the Afflicted.
ReplyDeleteThe form looks very good, but the topography is kind of a jumbled mess. I guess you are using a different pipeline, and I would like to see what is going to happen in Zbrush
ReplyDeletelooks good except for the lack of feet you already mentioned. if you're doing like everything in zbrush or mudbox then it's good for now. can't wait to see it.
ReplyDeleteGreat definition of the face. There's something about your rear image that makes it seem like the backs of the knees and/or the calf muscles could use a bit more form.
ReplyDeleteYeah keep working on the legs, they don't quite show the anatomy. Everything else is amazing.
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